Corn is the largest crop grown in America by far. According to a Wells Fargo market update, national corn yield has doubled since the 1960s. Aside from the recent push for corn-based ethanol production, most of the corn produced goes to animal feed. That means that most of the meat in which we eat is composed of corn. Unfortunately, corn is nearly 85 percent simple carbohydrate and the rest is sodium. That means that corn is not a sufficient source for nutritional value. Not only do we feed this to the animals in which we eat, we consume this product everyday in almost everything we eat. Almost 50 percent of our daily calories are from corn. Wells Fargo also states that beef, dairy, pork, and chicken consumption have increased over the past ten years. This coupled with steady increases of national cash corn prices means that corn production will likely remain a large portion of our diets.
It is not our fault that corn is such a large part of our lives. It makes sense that we use corn in everything because it can be produced very inexpensively, and we can break it down into simple sugars to incorporate into almost everything. As I mentioned earlier, American marketing can be partially to blame for this. Taking the idea of a surplus in corn production, we can see why companies simply target more super-sized options for soda and burgers. They are still gaining profit from the cheap corn and consumers feel treated because they can get more for a lower price.
Researching these facts on corn production has made me realize just how much of our diets are corn-based. From Gatorade to macaroni and cheese, corn plays a major role in how we get our calories. It is amazing that these kinds of foods came from corn. I can't think of anything like this ever happening in history. Corn production accounts for two New York states worth of acreage, and that is just in the United States. I don't think that these findings will have any affect on my relationship with corn because, as a college student, you are limited in the variety of food you can find as a result of the financial aspect and limitations from Sodexo. As much as I would love to lower my consumption of corn-based foods, it is not an option at this point. I still like the idea of using corn how it is today, however, I think there are better options. It makes sense to use it because it is so cheap and available in the United States. The only concern linked to the use of corn is the rising obesity rates in America as well as the lack of nutritional value in corn. Added useless calories to American diet is hardly what we need to see when we are trying to lower obesity rates and become healthier as a society. Gatorade will still be apart of my diet but less high fructose corn syrup is better for society.
"Corn Market Update." Wells Fargo. N.p., n.d. Web. 8 May 2013. <https://www.wellsfargo.com/downloads/pdf/com/industry/Corn_Industry.pdf>.
Pollan, Michael. "We Are What We Eat - Michael Pollan | Center for Ecoliteracy."Education for Sustainable Living | Center for Ecoliteracy. N.p., n.d. Web. 8 May 2013. <http://www.ecoliteracy.org/essays/we-are-what-we-eat>
What I see to be your main points are that corn somehow has taken over and makes up most of what we eat, and that it is very unhealthy for this to be the case.
ReplyDeleteYou use research from wells fargo and effectively inform the reader about the rapidly growing production of corn, and other agricultural products related to corn.
Essentially you say that due to sodexo you arent able to change your relationship with corn very much, and i totally agree.
You could clear up your intro a little. The jump from granola and gatorade to fast food and corn comes out of nowhere a little bit.
Your short essay is about corn, and all the foods that are corn based, or have corn included in them. Your essay is much more based on factual production information rather than history. You did however, explain how much corn yields have risen in the past 50 years which was a nice addition. I liked how you gave interesting facts about how much corn we have in or world today, including the fact about there being two New York states worth of corn acreage. Your quoted factual information was a wonderful addition to this essay because you focused so highly on the production aspect of corn. I think to improve you could possibly add a paragraph or even a few sentences regarding the history of corn, including where it came from. Also, there are a few minor grammatical errors, but other than that I really enjoyed reading your essay. I definitely learned something new: I never knew corn was an ingredient included in so many products in our world today!
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